Today we will be looking at some writing that could do with livening up!
Watch the clip from yesterday again if you like, to get you in the mood and make sure you have your SCEM grid ready.
I have attached a paragraph that needs a little bit of work. We can up level in a variety of ways but today I would like you look at interesting sentence openers and perhaps adding further detail possible. I've also attached a resource with ISPACE ideas for sentence openers.