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Day 2

Up-levelling paragraphs.

Today we will be looking at some writing that could do with livening up!

Watch the clip from yesterday again if you like, to get you in the mood and make sure you have your SCEM grid ready.

 

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vFTRQTxf22Y&safe=active

 

I have written some paragraphs that need a little bit of work. We can up level in a variety of ways but today we will look at varying sentence openers and using conjunctions to add further detail.


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