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First, I'd like you to watch Monday's clip again.


Today, your task is to imagine that you are Eep, seeing fire for the first time. I'd like you to write a diary entry about what happens in the clip. Please stop the clip at 1 minute and 17 seconds. (If you write about the rest of the clip, you will ruin tomorrow’s task.)

Remember to vary your sentence openers. Use the mats attached to help you.

You will also find my attempt at the diary entry. You can use this to help you find ideas if you are stuck.

When you have finished your work, it would be a good idea to read mine to see if you can magpie some ways to make yours better.